unfinshed untransitioned song by [insert name here]


just got the first part done. Adding more instruments, percussion and hopefully transitions between my first three parts. the second two are just the piano for now.
[[[critisisum allowed]]]]

Criticism Allowed

It always should be allowed. Not wanting critique only hurts you. Less work on the rest of us, but then you can’t improve. So you shouldn’t ever have to say this.

ANYWAY. I’m very impressed with this. Though I think you should try something different than sheets 11/12. Unless that’s the intro, you might have some trouble transitioning into that, but the rest is great. CANNOT WAIT.