About summer crush… the first riff of the techno thing should play more than once, and you took out one of the riffs it seems. 
Kinda copying gs here. My comments are in the green.
Wow, this is infinitely better than the one you posted in the demo thread. Same with Perfect Paradise.
You seriously didn’t like the mechanical song? I really loved it! Well if you don’t like it that much you can always give it to me …
And what? Give up on what I am? Put PEE and Lease together…enlongate that and you’ve got… (Oh) Please!
Don’t do it unknowned! I don’t want to see this song get destroyed by Muse… the horrible sounds it would make!!! (just had to get revenge)
STOP WRITING IN SMALL TEXT!
snorts with laughter
At least the song won’t get tortured by you.
Ha you had to quote my post just to read this!
I posted my opinions of the unfinished songs in there own threads.
I just wanted everyone to know that despite the fact that I locked your thread, Unknowned, I still thought your songs were great, worthy of notice.
https://www.notessimo.net/?id=45638
Zippa’s done.
I’ll post it later. There’s a strange glitch going on when I edit my first reply.
Comments appreciated.
BTW, hope this guy fits the song —>
Oh, and the little drumming add-on trick I did there on sheets 26/27 I learned from Pendulum’s Blood Sugar.
That was nice. The progression was smooth, and the percussion was sharp and aggressive without sounding like an ear piercing mess. Those metal guitar stabs and drops were a bit irritating at first, but it really worked with the piece once everything got moving. I guess if I had to give it a score, it would probably be a 4/5. Overall, the piece was well made, but there was nothing new and dynamic about it. Nice work, though.
Catchy song! 
The only problem now is where this would go. The techno or the rock thread. =P
Big prob though. I am stumped on Mechanical Dukeout and Summer Crush.
If people would post how they’d do one little bit that be great.
Mechanical Dukeout and Summer Crush are both heading to the chorus.
I’ve already got a buildup for Summer Crush’s chorus but I am really really stuck on Mechanical Dukeout.
Even so, I’m not giving up my songs.
You really need to finish the mechanical song. It has a great future.
and summer crush.
But more so on Mechanical Dukeout.
My advice for Mechanical Dukeout is this: I would make use of the Orchestral Hit because it is a boss theme and every boss theme should have an Orch Hit somewhere in it. Also, as I finished listening to the song in it’s unfinished state I noticed that you are in the perfect place for a song break. Make a sheet 9 but take away the high-hats, and add the orch-hit to the end of the last sheet (sheet 13) and through-out the song break in the new sheet, then suddenly bring everything back into whatever you want the chorus to be. That sounds like a boss-theme, right?
For Summer Crush, that sounds like the part where you last ended was build-up for a solo, I’d stick with the synth #1. Again, what you could do is take away the high-hats (or the entire drumset and then slowly put them back in, if that makes sense) and incorporate triplets or such and do what you want to make a solo. If you don’t want to make a solo there, my other suggestion is a repeat of the opening riff as the chorus, but with a lot more tacked on to make it fit. I’d do a solo though and then end the song by repeating the opening riff because it was pretty epic IMO.
Critic-King comes to the rescue.
Hey I’m just trying to help out. And you’ve posted three times now without saying anything helpful at all, Master of the Spam and Troll.
Huh. Critic-king isn’t too bad of an insult if you look at it the right way. Everyone asks for it, I give it, everyone’s happy. It’s just my way of telling a person who I don’t know that their song is being listened to.
Anywho, I’m going to put my REAL title in my sig. FROM NOW ON YOU SHALL ALL KNOW ME AS THE ARPEGGIO KING, REBORN FROM THE ASHES OF THE GOD OF EPIC!
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