Unknownedified: Space Dreams

looks at 5 star rating this is good.

Great song Unknowned. You put a lot of good motifs in there, and the melodies were very good too. I felt it was quite jumbled up … but - mumbles into the silence.

SO EXACTLY WHAT AM I DOING WRONG?

Unk, you need to change it up somehow, it was epic, but there starting to have the same kind of structure, think outside the box!

Also your being to hard on yourself… just because you arent getting ppl saying your songs are epic all the time doesnt mean your horrible… seriously, your in the top 10 in ROAST’s opinion, who seems to be the bane of your existance…

Also were kinda going off of the unknowned scale and comparing them to other songs of your own IMO… go off of what roast said of the “Unknowned Scale” which is usually double what were saying lol…

so for like 4/5… thats like a 8/5 compared to the rest of notessimo.

Also if your old news? What am I? Museline is the only one that says anything in my thread other than me… What is Sandalman3000? What about Roast and Anthony? You don’t see them leaving notessimo forever… don’t overreact, you should stay, your are a vital member of this community, no matter how many times you annoyingly proclaim your the “God of Epic”, it would be wierd never seeing you again.

So there’s my 2 cents… hope this inspires you!

I’m not at 10.
The asshole put me to less to 9000.

Plus, why should I be inspired to leave a thousand times. I’ve made many songs yet little views.

LOL its roast okay… he said the anagram for his name is More Rats Ass… what do you expect… he can be a prick but don’t take it personal… if you didnt notice before that you were in the middle of the High-Rank i believe…

Oh great now someone put die…thanks… probably roast… now he’ll probably that every person that puts die means 20 ppl does…and i count as 1/2 a person or something…

really unknowned I have been here almost a year and some people don’t even know I exist I have made lots of attempts at songs but I always used to get stuck but now I learned how to compose better and I am able to finish more of my songs.

and I think threatening Roast’s life is bannable

Yeah…so what?
He always gets away with his cocky self-obessive attitude.
I’m the one who had to change mine and I’m not cocky or self-obessive.
But Ruben is.

Roast’s cocky attitude is never totally serious…
your’s was and it got annoying, sorry

Oh yeah, thanks.

But still being all depressed isnt good either… just get over it… roast is some guy that lives atleast hours away from you… you’ll probably never meet him in person, and he just has that kind of attitude… just shrug it off… i would rather you be all cocky than be super depressed and think all your songs are shit when they are not even close…

if you want to go emo and leave… its your choice, see if i care then, ill gladly try my best to take yours spot, it may make roast happier… and your songs will just be forgotten

otherwise you can stay, make another song, try and divert from your normal techno… make a rock song dude… it will be different. ALL YOU HAVE BEEN MAKING IS TECHNO LATELY! You may be good at techno but they all sound kinda the same after awhile… so change it up with different instruments. And if you do change it up, people will listen…

This is my last try… I hope you just try it out instead of leaving…

That’s why I posted a poll.

Dude…wtf… why let notessimo decide for you…

Come on man… youve been here since the start as ???
also…your what 14? Dude im 16… your 2 years younger than me but you have 23982389 times better songs than me and 1337 skillz!

The polls a stupid idea… we have atleast 2 or 3 ppl that would choose die…

Roast would probably click die a thousand times.

Fine if your going to be all about Roast… ROAST IS ONE GUY COME ON!!

I think you should be more worried about what the mods think of you…

But if your going to be depressed and only focus on the bad things in what I say then GO AND DIE and let your songs never get better… never earn that “God of Epic” title… you have the potential, just your too damn depressed to harness it right now… i can see you going higher and higher… summer crush was an epic song just it reminded me too much of Circus Express…

But i guess all the possitive stuff i say doesnt matter to you anymore, please refer to the “Im having a bad day” thread then…

P.S. I was the first vote on you poll… i picked stay…

or STFU.

While Roastmasters’s opinion is the only source of The One And Only Truth I have yet to come across, he is not entirely infallible. He can’t even handle the idea of my sister’s dick (it’s FUCKING HUGE by the way). So, get the FUCK over this little DEPRESSIVE EPISODE before I TRACK YOUR ASS DOWN and SHOVE MY SISTER’S COCK UP YO’ ASS, BITCH.

OR, as previously indicated,

or STFU.

Thank you Hypo…

WHOOOAAAAA. What’s all this going on about me hating you. Let’s get this straight right now, I don’t hate you, I fucking love you, but you’re just too easy to troll. See? You probably took me fucking loving you seriously too, that’s just how susceptible to trolling you really are. Let’s get this even straighter right now, I don’t hate you, and I can’t hate you. At times, you’re nothing but a massive pain in the ass (i.e. now) but other than that there’s no reason for me or anyone to hate you.

And what’s all this going on about how your songs aren’t getting any views or criticism anymore. That hiatus you took from December to May was A LONG ASS TIME. You can’t just be like HEY GUYS REMEMBER ME I USED TO MAKE AWESOME SONGS AND IM BACK TO MAKE MORE AWESOME SONGS LOL and expect all the new notessimen to know who you are and get excited about your return. AND WTF ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT EVERYONE IGNORING YOU? Your song in the unfinished songs thread just got 5 consecutive comments all praising it.

AND WHAT’S ALL THIS GOING ON ABOUT THE TIER LIST. DUDE. DID YOU EVEN READ THE DISCLAIMERS? I thought I made it pretty obvious on facebook that it was a joke… and even if you do filter all the apparently-not-so-obvious-jokes you still have to remember that it’s one guy’s opinion. And by one guy I mean the guy who refuses to believe that hypo’s sister has a massive dick (which is not entirely my fault. I’m still traumatized by the whole muselline thing, can’t believe she has a dick too).

If you really are so worried about having an original song at all, try a different time signature

“Hypo’s sister’s massive dick” is now a notessimeme.