You know what. Never mind.
World for a Giant is trash.
This time, I will come up with a song.
And maybe…a bass solo.
So forget what I said about it being so special. It’s junk now.
Promise. I will come up with something different.
MIDNIGHT CIRCUS IS SO FREAKING MY ULTIMATE CREATION I HAVE MADE! QUICKLY BUMP AND HEAD TO THE FRONT PAGE!
I am bumping this post. I know how many I’ve done in a row…but it’s like people forgot about me…which I know doesn’t really happen…but 2 new songs…no comments.
you dont have to get comments on everything. sometimes we dont wanna say anything.
I know…just a little silent.
Constructive criticism is what you want? Alrighty then.
Mignight circus-
Not as good as you made it out to be, as an electronic song (the genre in which i despise deeply) it was amazing. As a rock song, it was sub-par. There was no noticable hook near the beginning nor after the bridge (which dissappointed me). Instead I had to count on the little lick from the clean electric guitar to keep my attention up. Now as for the bridge, I was let down. Hard. I knew it was finally going to build to something big… but NO. The bridge went no where, just back to the chorus. Boom IMO thats -1 point right there. Also the use of random instruments with no developement what so ever annoyed me. If this is an “ultimate creation” I eithier really really don’t like electronic or i really really don’t like music. You win tofu… no not even tofu. You win a bottle of womens dedorant.
Midnight circus- Too generic. 2.75/5
Wishgranter-
Uh more electronic ??? Fine ill give it a listen. Ok I like the intro, but if an intro is going to go on for 1:17 you should at least add some sort of heavier build up on the last 2-4 measures. Sheet 10 is the best part without a doubt, but whats with the random fender at the end? Some parts sounded great while others hurt my ears. I admit, i did catch my self snapping my fingers along with the beat, but i couldn’t imagine anyone dancing to it in a club, Its WAY to fast to even be danced to, all dance songs should be between 200-280 BPM. I will give you props though for originality. Yes this site is flooded with electronic/dance but its good to at least get some GOOD electronic and dance for a change. You win a McWhopper.
Wishgranter- meh. 3.25/5
For your information I dont Smo- OMG I KNOW THAT SONG, ICE AREA-CASTLE CRASHERS
how about some or ur constuctive critasism in other people’s threads?
this isn’t the only silent thread in the forum lol…
really!
I dunno, Roast. Midnight Circus was better than Wishgranter in my opinion.
Unknowned, you have a habit of using your choruses too much and that kinda makes your songs repetitive. Your transitions also need some work but overall, your songs are pretty good.
my problem is original songs, if i start one, it never gets finished.
oh, and youre sonhgs are thinning out too.
Oh yes… its what happens when you ABANDON THE GENRE YOU ARE GODLY AT.
Well…bad habits must die. And Roastmasters…the Rock Thread is not a musicial battlefield…but don’t think the battle between us has ended…K?
And by thinning out…you mean…getting crappier?
no, more like recycling. rythms chords and stuff. maybe you should take a drastic step from your normal stuff and try a video game song.
And the genre that I’m “GODLY” at has ran out of its own inspiration. I need something to bring me back the inspiration that helped me do what I do best.
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there ya go guy now go make some cool crap
You don’t have to do anything anymore guys. Inspiration hit me. And it doesn’t hurt.