I don’t know why I don’t like where this is going.
Any suggestions / criticisms?
I would be down to collab on this if that is what you’re looking for. I say that, but I dont have anything more than a few small ideas. Maybe if I mess around a bit I can work something out. That sound cool? I really like this a lot.
I personally think sheet 0 should be removed. Its a great intro, but it doesn’t fit with the rest of the song and probably should be for a whole different song altogether.
I can barely hear your bass drum in the song. And when I do they sound really boring. I think you need to try to make it more aggressive, so it will be on par with the rest. Possibly add in Bass Drum #4?
Otherwise, I love it. Good work here.
Experiment more with the drum sounds you can make, you should probably go for something more aggressive as said above.
As for sheet 0, you could either remove it or bring the pianos into the song so that the intro is more…fitting.
I think sheet seven should have a little oomph. maybe it could be like.
F, C, C#, A#
But that’s just y personal opinion, I love this to become featured.
Are those chords or…?
this sounds… so much like… something I would make… >.>
god, it sounds like you are making progress too, i have the feeling i wanna do a collab