I’ll be honest, you are not close. In fact, CtelinAjira is above more than half the notessimo community, so you shouldn’t feel so bad that he is much better. Hell, he’s better than me.
Anyways, improve the drums and it will sound actually pretty good.
P.S. I accidentally changed the timestamp. What a coincidence that it says 9/11.
The timestamp acctually should be ‘1359893600’.