What Do you Do with The Drunken Sailor (little remix) by Sailer

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#1

i was struggling to make something about the drunken sailor so here is the result (tell me what you think)

#2

Not bad, but not good either. This one needs more power on the main melody.

#3

The melody sucks… and the rythim is to long and slow. 2.1/5

#4

oops, this had too less power

#5

I just want tutorial