First songs

It was good, but it was kinda short and basic, and the rhythm was a little all over the place, as ix mentioned, and the drums were too simple (maybe unnesseccary) and it also kinda seemed a little off-key. But still a good effort.

thanks…and to me withought the drums it was to…empty and right now im tiring to transfer thing in real life i know but…it sounds off on this…like a G chord just sounds like a huge mess

Aight, so this is my first track. Dunno if it matters that i created the user after i made the song but i sure as heck is the guy who made it:P

That was really good!

Not bad, Hellstick. You’ll be right at home here.

I swear I’ve heard that somewhere before…

Nevertheless, it was good and I hope you’ll stay on with us.

song-51215

This guy says he edited it, although he didnt change anything as far as i can hear perhaps thats where you heard it? The original song is by Eurythmics, but I can assure you that this remix is made by me.

No I’ve heard the original song. I really like the techno bands of the 80s, such as Depeche Mode. When I first heard that ā€œYou Spin me Roundā€ was a huge meme, I was astounded, it was one of my favorite songs. It’s just that I don’t really have a huge memory of the names of the songs they made.

As for your song being stolen, I wouldn’t worry about it. Now that you’ve posted the song as being yours, no one is going to be fooled by the stolen version.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qeMFqkcPYcg
he wasn’t lying, but I guess you thought it was a user?

Nice video. I especially liked the part where it said:
ā€œThis video contains content from Vevo, who has blocked it in your country on copyright grounds.ā€

I think you have misunderstood my post. I love the Eurythmics and recognized that tune instantly, I just couldn’t put a name on it (guess I should have searched the title lol). As for the whole stolen thing, I was talking about this:

It isn’t the exact same…he fixed it up for you…(the metal guitars all go for an eighth instead of some going for a quarter, thus making the song sound cleaner)

That was intentional actually. I thought it sounded better for some reason:P

I have to agree, it made the song sound…dreamier, which is fine because that’s what the original song sounds like. Maybe it’s not as clean, but the guitar in the edited version is so hard-hitting that it makes it sound worse.

Thanks for the replies guys:)
I made another track that i was uncertain on where to post, since i couldnt find any topics to just post your tracks in general. I didnt really see it fit into any of the current genre threads , however, i did see a person or two in this thread who posted their second songs as well, so i guess it’s ok sort of:P
Anyway, if someone would please direct me to the propper forum in which i should post my songs ill go there next time i finish a track!
Here’s the track, its sort of drum n bass-ish i guess:

Well first off, I suppose if your song doesn’t really fit into a genre it could go in the random songs thread, but I suppose it would be ok to have a few songs in this thread. Also if you have about six good songs (I don’t know the exact number) you could ask the mods if you could make your own thread.

Now to the song …

Wow that is very good. The tubular bells, the organs and voxes really gave off a creepy vibe. The drumming was great, and also I loved the kalimbas. And I can’t believe I’m saying this but I also loved the techno basses. 90% of times when I hear them being used it fails horribly but I dunno you made it work in your song.

The only critisism that I have is that it was too short, I was getting into it when it ended, kinda like someone taking away my chocolate bar while I was eating it.

5/5, I wish I could make something like this!

Wow that was cool dude. I wish could produce something like this.

thats why you live in Amerca Lan’ O da Free and da haf-off

I loved it :mrgreen:
damn i wish i had room in my sig for more songs…

I … don’t live in America.