Rock Thread (Original)

Everyone.

Critique amazing songs.

It’s a comparison with < and > but comparing awesomeness!!

Mmkay.

Roastmasters: none

takes out notepad
stratches out unknowneds name

adds fireballs name

ITS WAR

Ohhhh ouch, that’s harsh. And a lie, he has created some pretty awesome songs.

Roast…we’re not done just yet…who said I was still out?

I was kidding. (rock)

Just finnished the Intro to Journey’s ā€œDon’t Stop Believingā€. Check it out! =D
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http://notessimo.net/?id=35002
Sorry, just had to do it (I’ve had this sitting on my computer for months now though lol) you’re welcome to use it if you want

I thought this was the ORIGINAL rock thread…

Woah… yeah, you’re right. Man, how’d I miss that? >.<

Hey guys I made a song inspired by the (insert name here) rock thing…so here is mine Lightning Rock…and if you didnt know Kamarai means lightning in japanese (sadly i dont know how to spell japanese )

This is NOT all that good of a song…atleast in my opinion…but hey its not bad…thanks in advance for the critism

Canz I make Remix?

Hello guys. I call this one.
Ehem
The beginning was to long, just get rid of the last two measures on sheet 0 and put the fades on the first measure.
I personally think those open Hi-Hats are too over powered on sheet 1.
Okay… That guitar… I don’t like it. It doesn’t have much rhythm, just clean it up a bit.
Lastly, make it a little longer maybe add some Fender Strat Guitar on sheet 9.

Sorry, but I’m just trying to make you successful.

Yes. Good idea.

Ummmm fireball…why dont you make your own…like Fire Rock or something
Its my song

And thank you for the critism…i will work on it pretty much immediatly

I have no creativity, whatsoever.

I’ll try to make my own.

Oh ya sure…dude youve made some awesome songs dude…no creativity PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT

Pffftttt yourself.

LOL well i hope i atleast inspired you somehow (rock)

Well anyway…i dont know what to have on the metal guitar so im probably going to look around unless you guys can help me out (rock)
AND ALSO
ONE HUNDREDTH POST

well here is my revised version so far