All good composers have self confidence issues :3
Agreed
Few things:
The third phrase of the male voxes (where they are all quarter notes in eighth note-lengths apart) was that intentional?
The 2nd Whole notes of the female voxes felt too low.
I think you can easily drop the Synthesizer #3 in the chorus. Use something different.
(My advice; make the Synth a background instrument)
Yah, like me…
Except I’m no good.
Yeah the main problem was the synth. I think a different synth would work better there.
(1) Oops, no. I noticed after I hit the share button, and I was too lazy to go back and fix it at the time.
(2) Really? Sounded fine to me. I’m afraid I’m gonna have to respectfully disagree with you on this one.
(3) I’ll look into it.
Not true (See: Hypo, StarWars, Roastmasters, etc.), but yes. It’s a character flaw of mine.
I also don’t have a problem with the female voxes. And personally no problem with the synth 3, but I’m the minority here.
Kaveman, awesome song.
Anyway, frustrated guitarskills won’t give me our goddamn collab.
Wow Octo… Think that is one of your better songs.
I was bored, so, i made some with the E.Piano
too much unresolved dissonance for such a light instrument.
Well I think it’s great!
the problem was not the main factor in the music, and it for me was too short to judge fully, of course that dissonance could be used to build tension into a more minor sounding passage or one with more consonance, but as a loop it becomes irritating after a bit. This is just my opinion, I can’t tell you whats good or bad except in relation to music theory.
Kinda sucky in my oppinion, but definetly better than my other crap lol
Since I am obviously not even close to being as good as any of the “regulars” on this site, my goal is to show improvement in some way… so I’ve conjured up three unfinished songs that hopefully show improvement.
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lol, I think they’re all 3 pretty cool, almost fell asleep listening to the third one during 1st sheet tho
It’s good…this one I have to say is better though.
They’re all really good, don’t underestimate yourself. You’d definitely be in my top-15 composers.
They are really good, love to hear more
Honestly, is only a cover… you can make a new cover with different instruments and other things Kyuubi
Honestly, is only a cover… you can make a new cover with different instruments and other things Kyuubi
Now, i made other demo
Nice fran, sounds awesome!!
This is pretty random…but different from my usual style…and yeah the title is completely random…
EDIT:
EDIT2: The Epic Adventure Of Entirely Random But Fascinating Events [Unfinished V3]
NOTE: The forum glitch has yet again occurred…(for me at least anyway) it shows fran’s last song, but it is actually my song…(it shows the wrong title).
EDIT3: I have no idea what is happening =S but that is my song above no matter what it shows -.-
Sounds great!
I was cringing throughout that song, you used a lot of unpleasant chords. (Like F + B.) But otherwise it was great, definitely one of your better songs.