Unfinished Songs / Demos

I thought the chorus sounded off…but i wasn’t sure why…is there something small there that i’m accidentally doing to make it worse?

lol that’s pretty good…Hope I can get better at making songs sometime though…I used alot of elipses XD

If I gave you my hand, would you take it?
If I gave you my heart, would you break it?
If we gave love a chance, could we make it?
No, I’m not ready to let go of you.

(Vocals are hard in Notessimo)

It’s good!

Didn’t like the “slur” of the male vocals.
Guitar wasn’t that great (it followed the bass too much; couldn’t hear the bass well)
I perferably enjoyed the end of the chorus: Good, but the toms came in a little early. Maybe put them in halfway through?
Use a different cymbal…that one isn’t good enough alone.
I like it to be a rather different bassline; the one you’re using right now isn’t that great to listen to.
If you change the bassline and make it louder, the guitar doesn’t need to change.

playing with the triangle wave

this too ?id=59756

That sounds epic…please finish!! =P

The Rhythm Triangle Wave (whole notes)…
Use a different instrument!

i’ll play around with it a little more, but what would you personally recommend?

we’ll see if it still sounds good after i do more with it, hopefully it’ll turn out nice!

Happy 4/20, guys! ^^
Garbage from your fellow Karo.

That facts that I got new headphones and that Karo’s murking around again inspired me to make this:

Btw, wacky song Karo? I LOVE IT.

But… where’s the rest of it?

I LIKE it
Got a catchy beat too

I try so much to hate your songs. :frowning:

Octo is Jesus.
Demo Eight and Demo Nine.

I loved both of them. But I think a bit of the piano rhythm on demo 8 needs to be worked on.

Roulette and Demo Ten.
Should be enough to satiate your boundless curiosities for a li’l bit, eh?

Roulette sounds like it could be turned into something quite epic. Demo Ten almost sounds like it belongs in Megaman or something.

Fun facts: Roulette was actually inspired by this song, and probably took around five minutes to make. c:

Ahh I see. I must say, that song was quite inspirational. But enough with the sarcasm, I can’t believe you made something from that. XD