Hopefully they are improvements.
Still good but I think the clarinet is causing the off-tuneness.
G and F in beginning of Sheet 7 with trombones was bad.
Acoustic disappeared? D:
Bassline was somewhat boring.
Epic, otherwise. I think you can remove one of the Sheet 0’s
Very nice, I like the basic structure of this song. But I must say I dont like a lot of the instruments you used, please (oh please) take out those trombones (every single one) and put a french horn or tumpet 2 in their place (please). and I dont like the clarinet…
Please think of some different instruments to use (those ones buzz SO much, and a few are a tad out of tune) other then that… this could be cool.
Personally, I am one of those people who has a passion for music and can VERY easily understand it. I understand, what you were doing here, and I LOVE IT! 5/5 stars! Congratulations!
i think it could use a better ending but otherwise it was good
Honestly, the clarinet is probably my favorite of all the instruments he used. I mean, what else gives you a strong sense of flashback? The trombones are great too, but maybe at least try a different instrument, just for kicks.
True dat with the flashback thing
I really like the trombones as compared to george and TFB, and unlike TFB I especially love the resolution from the F,G to the Ab and Eb. And most of all the resolution from the last trombone chord in sheet 6 to the first chord in sheet 7.
AND it repeats
I’ve listened to it about 20 times and I can’t get enough