First songs

Notessimo Maestro
#223

Ok critique:

  1. Sounded a lot like random notes. Try and make a tune.
  2. Sounded a lot like random sections. You should do something to join them up.
  3. You could change the note lengths
  4. You could repeat some of the sections
  5. You could put all the notes on the lines

It sounded like to me you picked a random instrument and placed them randomly around. That doesn’t really count as a song.

#224
#225

LEEEEEEEEEETS DOOOOO TE TIIIIME WARP AGAAAAAIIINN!!!

sorry had to do that.
but seriously, replace the first main instrument, and it was cool up until the orchestra hits. for a 1st, its a 5/10

#226

It’s my first song!
It’s a remix of mario (or yoshi) from one of the games I can’t remember the title of.

Tell me how it is!

#227

That there just blew me away. Great first song!

#228

OMG That was amazing!I can’t wait to hear your other songs.
EDIT Wewt, 200 posts!

#229

That was the overworld 1-1 theme for super mario world.
Btw, Outstanding work!

#230

MY FIRST N2 SONG !! Plzz rate and comment, got another song coming soon

#231

I don’t really like the last sheet. And I thought it was a bit random. It was OK for a first song, though.

#232

well i guess thats respectable 3 Starz is pretty good for a newbie like me.
but ive got another song coming

#233

Well I rated it 5/5!

#234

Off topic: you might wanna make your sig abit smaller… its lags this computer like crazy

#235

hey its kain and how do i post my song notessimo.net/misc/window.php?id=0

#236

Please review this topic for how to post your songs.
If you still have any questions, PM a moderator. Moderators can be easily distinguished from regular users by our green usernames.

#237

My first song, I’m working on other video game songs!

#238

good song

I’ll try and find my one

#239

this is my first song. be brurtal

#240

I thought it was great after the intro was over.

#241

WAY LESS QUARTER NOTES!!!

#242

I agree with kar.