First songs

my first song

well by himself

TRULY Journeys is his first song
but he did ask me for a little help for the snares and bass drums

but its not bad
A) You didnt use 1/4 notes, so you earned ----> this guy
B)It not super random and the drum beat isnt bad (for a beginer)---->

BUT you went random arpeggioing <—
so make a good riff and not so much arpeggioing PLOX…but ive already said this stuff to you

mainly Im hoping to get better critism from my peers lol

What Kar said.

Kar…just call me Kam or Kama…thats what my Kong chat ppl call me and it makes more sense than kar

But I like kar. What chatroom do you hang out with?

Lamp Factory. You?

What’s your username?

Oh I quit Kongregate. I had two accounts, one in Ivory Tower and one in Chill Lounge.

Same as here. My secondary is DarkEcl1pse, since DarkEclipse was taken…but I RARELY get on since ive found this EPIC SITE
I think it was called note-cheese-emo.chet

I heard this guy in their forums named Kamarai is lame

Ya I heard he makes crappy random acoustic songs and spams them on some thread…

I heard there was this guy who said:

And I think this applies you Fireball. Eventually someone will turn this kind of post into a Roast vs Unknowned, DarkDan vs Ixsetf, Sandalman vs Everyone, type rivalry, and I speak for everyone when I say these hate comments suck. Tell me what you want about this post, personally I don’t care. Your post was blatantly cruel, and that’s all that matters.

LOL star were having some fun OMGARSH!!!

We cant joke around???

Hell no.

ok… WAIT! NOOOOOO! NOT THE DUNGEON AGAIN!!! NOOOOO IM SORRY!! clang-cell door is locked

Oh whoops I didn’t see your post Kamarai…well now I guess I look like a jerk. As long as no one was truly insulted i suppose my own comment is null and void. Sorry for the mis-read, it seems that kind of thing always happens to me (how long ago was it that I struck back at Guitarskills’ compliment that I took as an insult? Two, three days?)

You have mod powers, man. If you make this kind of mistake again in the future, just delete your post(s). It’s like nothing happened. :stuck_out_tongue:

Ya

The hell did I miss?

Uh… World War Three.