Well what about Gray Wilted Flowers?
As of now, I am bored out of my god damn mind so fortunately for you, I will be criticizing the hell out of you and your songs. I am confident that my critique will aid you on evolving your current notessimo state of mind. So, do not expect any compliments, praise, or any similar signs of satisfactory in the following wall of text. Brace for impact.
GRAY WILTED FLOWERS
Pros-
HAHAHAHHAHAHAH
Cons-
-Wtf at the Metal guitar coming in to late to make a difference
-Strat was off beat, seemed cool at first but repeating it over and over gets annoying
-Wtf at random instruments that you never used before, theres nothing wrong with experimenting but…
Terribad Cons-
-TO GOD DAMN LONG FOR THE SAME RIFF OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OV-gets shot
-THAT ENDING WAS UNFORGIVABLY BLEH
-The intro was average. NO INTRO OF YOURS SHOULD BE AVERAGE
Song was below average for you. That ending was just a big F U in my opinion, you can easily tell that you just wanted the song over and done with so you can move on to something more suited to your liking. Now with the song being 4 minutes long repeating the same piano riff over and over and over (DON’T SHOOT ME) and expected the song to somewhat progress. This is what I mean… Go to 0:40… Ok nothing wrong with that… 1:40 same thing, no prob It’ll probably progress to something epic… 3:20 WTF IS THIS. When I saw the metal guitar I was like YEEAAH about time then I was like…son i am disappoint… Now for the intro… wait… what intro? THATS THE PROBLEM! And whats with the random instruments? Its good to experiment but its an odd combination.
It actually wasn’t that bad overall, I’m just bored and your topic is a good cure.
7.5/10
Even though I got a good rating…it feels like I’m sucking. =(
New song! Perfect Storm has been finished!
HUZZAH! MY GOLDEN BIRTHDAY! 13 on the 13th. Could it get any better?
Happy motherphucking birthday, yo!
Hey, I’m 13. It’s okay.
Lulz, here’s your Costco™ cake I promised!
Yum…
Oh my god, I love you, uchihakyle.
Happy birthday Unknowned! 
Love the cake by the way haha
Thanks you guys…and thank you for the cake.
Guess what? Whos older than who now?
Wait…
What…
I’m older than all of youse (I’m sure)
17 FTW
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Not Clonefan)
yeah, gonna be hard to beat my 24
Aw
Happy Birthday. My present from me to you is this review of your new song.
The Perfect Storm did have a catchy metal guitar riff but that is all it was. The same riff with the same rhythm. You could have built upon that to make the song better. I don’t like bass drums and snares that are “stacked” like the ones you had here. They are too loud and take away from the song. Also, the song felt empty. It could have used cymbal #1 and bass #4 to add some background to it. The fender strat should have been an octave lower to prevent the loud screeching it produces when it is too high on the sheet.
I liked the riff. It was very catchy and it gave the song a suspenseful (sp?) sound. The title says suspense and that riff defines it.
3.78/5
I hope you get better presents than my crappy gift.
3.78
That is one wierd number
I give it a 4.75 only for a bit of repetitivness.
looks like creativity is coming home.